Profile of luvnest

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Thanks for sharing this with us, I had a good laugh.

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overall:

• little micro mistakes here and there (unit preservation), don't send units to cap blindly into the fog of war.
  
• too spread out as axis, better to secure less territoy that you are able to hold instead of much territory that you are likely to loose once you get pushed back. More importantly to mention is to hold key buildings (like the one next to your cutoff) to secure a foothold on the map
  

1:30 kubel push to cut off was good, but why not simply wire the cutoff off and move the kubel to intercept the rifles coming from the south, it stood idle for at least 3 min, giving your opponent a chance to establish a foothold in the center/south
3:15 dont build the sangbags so that your enemy can use them too, secure key buildings at the cutoff
4:00 dont charge riflemen in green cover, especially if the retreat path makes you go all around the cemetary giving your opponent much time to finish it off. the kubel would have helped greatly with the engagement in the middle, no need to guard the cutoff. securing cutoffs only makes sense if you are really CUTTING resources off (or if you have full map control of course)
5:00 you should have expected the m20, it was an obvious choice since you went kubel , prepare for it with mines and shrecks and rackets, and pull back a little bit
8:00 you are floating too much MP which hurts your field presence, get MG34 or Jägers
9:15 unecessary fallschirm jäger loss? get MG34 before that
10:00 get one squad of fallschirms to augment your forces. 3 volks + fallschirm is too fragile
10:40 forces to spread out, concentrate on the center, go for a cutoff manouver and cap the sides with one volks
12:00 still no healing truck --> unecessary MP losses due to low healthed squads + more Vet for your opponent
13:00 don't go for more than 1 FallSchirm at this point, go for an MG34 or anouther Volk
14:00 you got the whole south but it's not connected since you dont controll the cutoff, secure that first before pushing in the north
15:00 flak hq way too forward, it's exposed to tanks
17:00 your army compositon is too fragile as it is: 2 volks 1 fall 1 sturm, why obers now?
You should be aware that there are tanks by now on the field, usually way sooner when fast major tech, gotta prepare for that
19:00 another ober? no. not with you knowing that there are tanks on the field

Hope that helps.

Hey Von, you gotta be strong now, if you want to talk about it you can always come to me

• Steam name/id: Steam Profile
• Role: Mentor
• Time zone: CET / GMT
• The type of help offered: Improving 1v1: Map awareness, timings, build orders, etc.
• Any other request? As Sib stated, be serious about your request. Tell me in what department you want to improve specifically.